Subculture Evaluation -
The purpose of the brief was to create a shoe design based on a chosen sub culture. My idea was to create multiple involvement of shoes and different medias within these design ideas. I created two blended shoe ideas, suhc as: my Doc Martin and High top combination shoe. My final piece was based on a combination of a hidden heal trainer and a high wasited boot. My combination of shoe ideas helped me to narrow down and decide my final design. Before producing these ideas I decided that my sub culture would be Hip - Hop. I chose Hip - Hop as I felt confident with the style and I know different elements of Hip - Hop I produced my ideas based around Hip - Hop , from the use of colour and images of different things associated with the style. I have tried to consider many of the different formal elements including, colour - I used colours which relate to the style and theme of Hip - Hop, texture - with the use of newspaper i was able to create a rough and layered texture and form - I kept my form to 2D, leaving it flat on cartridge paper. The materials I used to make and prodcue my final piece were nespaper, images from the internet, watercolours, fineliner pen and water. I decided to use these materials as I wanted to use famaliar materials which I had also experimented with using my design ideas. The techniques I used was starting of with ripping up piece of newspaper and sticking them down; then beginning to stick on the images; painting on the watercolours over the top; adding my pen drawing of my shoe and then using water to spread out the fineliner ink. The materials that I used helped to give the effect of layers and build up of textures with the use of the different materials I used. The technique I used gave this effect, if it was done differently it may have been layered differently; creating a different effect. I feel that my work is successful because it combines multiple techniques, such as: Layering, painting, sketching. It also uses a minimal amoutn of colours with the use of watercolours; and colour in the images. The use of drawing in a black fineliner creates a bold effect, making it stand out, which I think has made my work very successful. I made a small change when in the process of creating my final piece. The change i made was to use watercolours, i wasn't going to originally but then i decided it would emphasis mu shoe more when put behind my drawing. I feel as though my work meets the requirements of the brief in the way that it demonstrates Hip - Hop with the use of related colours and images, and the combination of two shoes to create an original Hip Hop style shoe. if my work was to be sketched for the exhibition, i think it would be best presented in the way of mourning. I would decide to use foam mounting, scale of A5 and it would be placed in the mid-view. This is how I think I would present my work. These choices are so that my work can stand with the use of foam mounting. The A5 scale is small, but will still stand out with the of bold outlines and colours. And in mid-view, it would be eye-level so you could look at it with it standing out and drawing your eyes to it. I feel as though my final shoe piece was very successful; it's colours relate with hip Hop, it stands out, it's unique, it's bold and it uses two different techniques combined, as well as my unique shoe design idea. However, my piece has let me down with it's small A5 size, which i feel as though would make a big difference to how it is presented and the blending of the images with the background and the pen and wash technique isn't very clear. Apart from these small negatives, my positives of my piece, overpower the negatives; making my piece very successful. I have recently decided to improve and develop from my original final piece. I decided to do this as I felt as though my first final piece which I originally did, was of poor quality; as of it's size and quantity on the page. Since, I have improved it greatly from my original final piece; from changing the size, to including many different painting techniques. For starting my improved final piece I started by prodcuing my newspaper collage onto a piece of A3 cartridge paper. I than began to add some dry brush techniques using different acrylic paint colours such as red, brown and blue. I then began sticking down the pictures and applying some dry brush and washing techniques with the acrylic paint. After stickingdown the images I had originally tried a couple of times to produce some image transfer techniques to my work but they were unsuccessful so I decided to go over the top with some of my other images which I had printed off from the internet. I added some splatter effects on the images and some other techniques such as: Mixing and blending the colours, blending, sponge effect, large detail with acrylic paint and layering using different materials (such as sugar paper). I then began to paint (which would be the background of my shoe) some white acrylic paint onto the page, once dried I added some painted black detail. I wanted to keep some of my ideas from my original trial final piece so I decided to paint the shoe green, blue, purple and red (I had previously used these colours for the background for my trial piece as these relate to the theme of Hip Hop). The red was a development as to add some more brightness to the shoe and further colour. I also had the idea to create a slit effect, creating a window look, making the whole piece look as though it's four indivual pieces, I think this adds a bit more of a thought process to my work. I think that I have improved and deveoped from my previous final piece very well. This time around - due to idea to use the dry brush technique - I wanted to create a piece which was inspired by the work of Robert Rauschenburg as I had used a similar technique to his work. I think that I have definietey improved from my original final piece which is now my trial piece. I have added more images and enlarged them why overlapping them with materials and differentpainting techniques. I have also added colour to my shoe and created a windowed look. Overall, I feel as though my piece is very successful and fits in with the brief as I have prodcued an approprite subcultured iconic shoe artwork. |